I loved the scene with Draco and Lupin. Lupin's sadness and concern, Draco's horror and denial. Really moving. I'm so looking forward to Harry finding out about Draco. And will we get to see Draco change? GLEE!
You write so many wonderfully inventive magical things like the insects and the mysterious black box. I just love being immersed in this world.
And, man, who knew that someone licking another person's hand could be so hot?